the blackness

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Chapter 1: where are we?
(by Joseph, added on 28 May 2009 03:17 PM)


I opened my eyes. There was no light in the room, not one hint. My girlfriend lay next to me, her mouth slightly parted in a way that made me realize she was scared. I put my arm over her and pullled her close to me.

"Hush, my darling," I whispered. "It's ok."

She stered then.

"Joseph? Is it you?"

I stroked her face with my fingertips and gently kissed her forehead. "Yes, I am here."

Then we heard the strangest thing...a wimpering, growning, shrieking sound. I stiffened. What was making that noise.

We soon found out...a huge beast charged into the room, picked both of us up by the neck and began to swing us in lasy circles.

what is it doing? I wondered. Then I realized it was trying to brake our necks!

"Ok, that's it!" I growled to myself.

I whipped my pistol out of it's holster, aimed and shot the beast through it's brain. It released us, swayd and then fell to the stone floor with a sickening, crunching sound.

I stood over it. My eyes were flat black. Rage boiled like multin lava in my veins.

Next to me, my girlfriend, who's name was Jessica, whispered, "What was...that?"

"I don't know, but it was probably here to kill us."

"but why?" she asked me. "Why would he...it...want to kill us?"

"I don't know right now, Jessica. All I know is that we must try to escape this acursed place, and soon."

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