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Chapter 1: Without Sirius
(by Amanda Schmeling , added on 20 January 2005 10:36 PM)


Harry Potter and the Suspicious Girl
Not by J.K. Rowling, but by Amanda
Schmeling

Chapter 1
Without Sirious

Harry was once again back at the Dursley’s for another depressing summer. It was more depressing now then it had ever been for him because Sirious wasn’t going to be in his life anymore. He wished he could have done something to prevent his god father from dying, but he knew there was nothing he could do. It was very hard for Harry to cope with him being gone. After all, Sirious was the one person that actually loved Harry out of his family. The Dursley’s sure weren’t considered his family. They were just a bunch of gits anyway.
One morning Harry awoke bright an early because an owl flew into his room with a letter. At first Harry thought that it was the Daily Profit, but then he remembered that he had canceled the subscription after last term. He took the letter from the owl’s leg. It was from Hermione.

Dear Harry,
I hope you are trying to have a fun summer. I know it is really hard for you though. I’m writing this letter because there is something that I have been waiting to tell you for quite sometime now. I just didn’t ever get the nerve to tell you. I really like you. I have been having dreams about you every night ever since last year when we went in the three broomsticks. You are so wonderful and charismatic. You are amazing. When I first kissed you getting off the train two years ago, I started having feelings for you as more then just a best friend. I can’t wait to see you. I’ll find a way to get you to the burrow. Please send this owl back with a reply.

Love,
Hermione

Harry read this letter through three times. As he sat and thought about what she wrote. He really did like her too. He was just afraid to tell her just as she was afraid to tell him. Harry wrote a response back to her.

Dear Hermione,
I loved your letter. Yes, I certainly do like you too. I was also afraid to tell you. Let’s be a couple shall we?
I also can’t wait to see you. When I see you I’m going to throw my arms around you just like you always do when you see me!

Love,
Harry
P.S. I loved it when you kissed me too.

Harry got dressed and went downstairs for breakfast. He didn’t even bother to say hello to the Dursley’s because he knew they were going to ignore him anyway. Harry couldn’t wait to get out of there.
Harry wrote a letter to Ron to see how his summer was. Headwig was perched in her cage. She was as cute as ever.
“Take, this letter to Ron for me okay?” asked Harry.
Headwig nipped his ear affectionately.
She flew away.
The next morning Harry heard someone outside of his window. He was curious to know who it might be. He looked out the window.
“Harry, it’s me, Hermione!” she whispered.
“What are you doing here?” asked Harry.
“I’m rescuing you.” said Hermione in a hushed voice.
“Are you like my princess now?” asked Harry enthusiastically.
“Well, I guess when you put it like that!” said Hermione.
“That’s sweet of you to come all the way over here especially at this time of night.” Harry said affectionately.
“It’s all right, anything for my boyfriend and best friend!” said Hermione smiling.
“I’ll pack my stuff then!” said Harry.
“We better get going before the Dursley’s find out I’m here.” said Hermione quickly.
Harry crammed his things into his trunk. They headed for the burrow.
“Hermione, how are we going to get there?” asked Harry. “I mean, we can’t just apperate because we could get expelled.”
“I know I have a plan.” said Hermione.
“And your plan is?” asked Harry.
“We will fly on broomsticks.” said Hermione.
“I thought you were suggesting a horse and buggy!” said Harry with a laugh.
“I was thinking that, but then I decided that we should fly on broomsticks instead.”
They finally got to the burrow. When they got there, Mrs. Weasley threw her arms around them in a hug that almost knocked both Harry and Hermione over.
“Oh, I’m so happy to see you both!” said Mrs. Weasley excitedly.
“Were happy to see you too!” said Hermione.
“Where are the others?” asked Harry.
“They’ll be down in a minute.” said Mrs. Weasley.
Harry was really looking forward to spending the rest of the summer at the Weasley’s.


Chapter 2: the rest of the summer
(by ian mcnamara, added on 17 March 2006 09:17 AM)


When harry got inside the burrow he saw ron fred and george.

"Hay harry how is it going mate?" said ron with a smile on his face.
"Hay ron nice to see you again me and hermione are going out together."
"Yes i know you are she told me yesterday i was the one who told her she should come and get you her self."
Harry grinned and then fred and george told him about how well their business was doing. Harry was happy they wheir doing so well.
"Do you want to come with us today harry and help us so you can see how well we are doing" said fred.

"Yes we could all go if that is okay mrs weasley."
"Okay lets all go we can get your books and stuff for next year while we are here. Harry here is your book list."
When harry looked at the letter he found that he was quidge captain.


Chapter 3: Invisibility gum
(by Amy Harrison, added on 20 November 2008 01:39 AM)


Diagon alley was less busy than usual when they arrived. They first went to Gringotts where harry took out enough money for his books and the things he would need throughout the school year. As usual he felt guilty when he saw the small amount of Galleons in the Weasley's vault.
"Where to next?" asked Ron.
"I need some Owl treats for Hedwig" said Harry.
"Yeah, Pig's supply is running pretty low" agreed Ron.
They made their way to Eeylops Owl Emporium where Harry bought an enormous amount of treats.
"Hedwig's going to be so large she won't fly if you feed her all that stuff" Ron pointed out.
Harry grinned. Ron as usual was buying a small amount of treats with the allowance he had to last him for the year. What harry didn't say was that he'd bought that much so that he could share what he didn't need with Ron. Hermione bought some treats for Crookshanks and they exited the shop.
"Mum said to meet her in Madame Malkins" said Ron. "She got annoyed last time because when we went on our own I got the robes two inches too short. I looked like a plonker."
"Yes Ronald, you did" agreed Hermione. The two glared at each other until harry put a stop to it. The two of them frowning at each other they entered Madame Malkins.
Harry's heart sank when, on enering the shop he heard the two voices he did not want to ever hear again. He looked for the source of the voices and found Draco Malfoy standing on a stool being measured by Madame Malkin, his father standing nearby.


Chapter 4: Diagon Alley
(by Amy Harrison, added on 20 November 2008 01:40 AM)


Diagon alley was less busy than usual when they arrived. They first went to Gringotts where harry took out enough money for his books and the things he would need throughout the school year. As usual he felt guilty when he saw the small amount of Galleons in the Weasley's vault.
"Where to next?" asked Ron.
"I need some Owl treats for Hedwig" said Harry.
"Yeah, Pig's supply is running pretty low" agreed Ron.
They made their way to Eeylops Owl Emporium where Harry bought an enormous amount of treats.
"Hedwig's going to be so large she won't fly if you feed her all that stuff" Ron pointed out.
Harry grinned. Ron as usual was buying a small amount of treats with the allowance he had to last him for the year. What harry didn't say was that he'd bought that much so that he could share what he didn't need with Ron. Hermione bought some treats for Crookshanks and they exited the shop.
"Mum said to meet her in Madame Malkins" said Ron. "She got annoyed last time because when we went on our own I got the robes two inches too short. I looked like a plonker."
"Yes Ronald, you did" agreed Hermione. The two glared at each other until harry put a stop to it. The two of them frowning at each other they entered Madame Malkins.
Harry's heart sank when, on enering the shop he heard the two voices he did not want to ever hear again. He looked for the source of the voices and found Draco Malfoy standing on a stool being measured by Madame Malkin, his father standing nearby.


Chapter 5: The encounter with the Malfoys
(by Lewis Crack, added on 31 July 2009 03:09 PM)


"Oh no." moaned Ron softly as soon as they saw the Malfoys. "I'll get him one of these days!" he added snarling.
"Ooooh! Here's Potter, Weasley and Granger." sneered Draco Malfoy, as soon as he saw them.
"I say Weasley's so poor he couldn't buy himself a decent set of robes."
Ron turned scarlet and shook with rage. He lunged forward, but...
"Don't." whispered Hermione urgently.
"Ooooh! Trying to stop me are we?" drawled Malfoy.
Hermione suddenly slapped Draco hard in the back of the head.
Malfoy looked startled and slightly scared.
"Leave us alone." said Hermione in a cold voice.
"Come on, let's get our robes and get out of here." Harry whispered.
"Good idea." whispered Hermione.
"See you at Hogwarts, Potter, Weasle King and Granger." said Malfoy in a carrying voice, as the trio went to get their robes measured by Madam Malkin.
"Really," said Madam Malkin in distress.
"The commotions that go on in my shop!"
Her hands shook a little as she adjusted Harry's new robes.
"There all done." said Madam Malkin finally after about 10 minutes.
Harry, Ron and Hermione each paid for their robes, and left the shop.


Chapter 6: Hagred
(by Zac, added on 29 August 2009 11:09 PM)


Hermien, Ron and Harry went out of the shop. "What's say we have ourselves a drink? Suggested Ron. "Good Idea, I'm so dry, I can't speak propperly! Said Harry. Just as they entered the leaky caldran, Hermien screamed, "Look! There's Haggred! "Your write! Said Harry.


Chapter 7: Hagrid's New Job
(by Jay, added on 12 December 2009 03:37 PM)


Noticing them, he smiled and made his way over.
"Hey kids. Thursty?"
"Yeah." Ron replied as he counted the change he'd gotten from his last purchase.
"More than a bit."
"Four butter beers coming right up. My treat." Hagrid said Brightly. After thanking him, Harry Ron and Hermione found a table and sat. He joined them a moment later with four bottles of butter beer and three pumpkin pasties.
"Wow. Thanks Hagrid." said Harry as they all began opening their drinks. Hermione asked,
"What's got you in such a generous mood today?"
Ron took a long draft of the refreshing chilled beverage.
"Man." he said setting it down.
"That's good. Yeah Hagrid. What's with all the treats?"
"I thought you'd never ask." He leaned in close and said in a hushed voice,
"They're startin' a new course this season and guess who they want to be the teacher?"
Ron pointed at him.
"No way! Well that's..." Hagrid's left hand muffled Ron's noisy exclamation as he pressed his finger to his lips with the other.
"Shshsh." He looked around to see if anyone might have overheard.
"Its not finalized yet, but I've got a real good feeling Dumbledoor's made up his mind."
Hermione smiled and Harry sported a thumbs up.
"So what new course will you be teaching?" asked Hermione around a mouth full of pasty. Just then, an owl flew in with an envelope for Ron. It was a brief letter from his mom Stating that he should phone her as soon as he got it and to bring Hermione along. She also Wrote that he should not let Harry know where he's going as she wants to discuss a surprise birthday Party for him. He Quickly crumpled the sheet of paper and rose.
"Uh, hermione?" He said interrupting the conversation.
"Snape wants to see us right now in his classroom before school starts." a slightly confused look crossed her face.
"Snape? Why? I hope I'm not losing more points for letting you copy my homework again." Harry and Hagrid chuckled. Ron blushed.
"Well, he didn't say, but he said it was important." Hermione sighed and slid off her seat.
"Lets get this over with." They said goodbye and left.
"So as I was sayin'," Hagrid continued in an almost whisper.
"They gave me six of them to practice with this summer, and sep fer me forgettin' a few things, I can drive them better than apollo. Wanna tryam out?" Harry didn't respond. He rested his chin on his hand and had a dreamy look in his eyes and a silly grin that till now, Hagrid hadn't noticed.
"Harry!" He said more loudly snapping his fingers in front of his fixed stare. Harry blinked.
"I'm sorry Hagrid. What did you say?"
"I said do you wanna tryam out?"
"Try what out?" Harry asked confused.
"The flying unicorns!" He nearly shouted in exasperation. Hagrid covered his own mouth this time and didn't have to look around to know the eyes he felt turning in his direction. He cleared his throat and stammered,
"Isn't that a great band there Harry? My favorite, actually." Harry suppressed a snort.
"yeah. Mine too."
"Think I got a few of their live albums at home like I was sayin, wanna check'em out?"
"Sure."
In his embarrassment, Hagrid nearly carried harry out of the Leaky Cauldron. Once outside they took a more leasurely pace.
"So." Hagrid began with a smirk.
"What's the special young lady's name?"
"Huh? What lady?" Harry questioned, faining perplexion.
"Cmon, Harry." He replied waving a hand dismissively.
"I've been here a long time. Only time boys ever get that look in their eye is when a girl put it there. So tell me. Who is she?"
Harry let out a longing sigh.
"Its Hermione." Her name escaped his lips with such tenderness Hagrid had to smile.
"She's my girlfriend now. I like her so much. Always have, but was never sure how she felt about me till today. I love her hair, her dazzling smile, those big beautiful brown eyes. Whenever she looked at me, I felt like...like, christmas in heaven."
On and on his admorations pored out the entire way to Hagrid's hut.
"Congrats to the both of ya. You make a great couple. If ya get the hang of drivin' these chariots, I'll even letcha take her out in one sometime, but keep that tween you and I, k?"
They went to the back of the hut where 4 unicorns stood in a row softly braying and swishing their lion tails. Their gentle eyes welcomed the company.
"There they are. Beautiful, aren't they?" He reached out to stroke the nose of the creature closest to him. He peered at her name tag.
"Moonlight. one of the calmest of the bunch. you'll love her. We'll take her and Cupid. Always need a male and a female. Never forget that."
Harry marveled at the lovely beasts but wondered why such a course was necessary when they had their broomsticks. in the next instant his question was answered.
"Very relyable." Hagrid said his back now turned as he rummaged through a bag of sattles and rains.
"and better to travel with at night than broomsticks." He sattled the animals, and then preceeded to instruct Harry on how to handle them.
"All it takes is a light flick of the wrists like this to get them going." He demonstrated.
"Right flick to turn right, left to go left. Give a little kick to go faster, small pull up on the rains for up, tiny pressure on the stirrups to go down, little pull back to back or go backwards. Nothin' to it." Harry couldn't wait.
"Great! Lets go!" Hagrid scratched his head and peered up into the bright morning sky and knew he had forgotten something but wasn't sure what. Deciding he would deal with the problem when it arose, he helped Harry mount Moonlight before climbing onto Cupid. Harry flicked his wrists once and was taken forward on a slow canter, Hagrid beside him at the same pace. For a while they each enjoyed the quiet sounds of the morning. Then they gently pulled up on the rains and the unicorns spread their downy wings and smoothly lifted into the air. Harry was surprised to discover the flapping of the wings neither hindered his ability to drive or his line of vision, and actually found the sound soothing. He seemed to glide.
"How's it goin', Harry?" came Hagrid's surprisingly clear voice a few yards behind him.
"Cool!" He said giving Moonlight a little kick. She took up speed. Hagrid followed as closely as was possible.
"I knew you'd like it. Lemmie know if you have any questions."
He looked down and was amazed at how high up he was. Hogwarts, the forest and other sections now looked to him like a miniature map. Squinting, he caught sight of Dumbledoor looking up at him and Hagrid with horror. Harry smiled, leaned over a bit to wave and call to him.
"Hey! I'm alright! This is gr..." but in his pure joy he excitedly kicked his feet and Moonlight took off like a flash of lightening. The next thing he knew he lost his seat and was gripping the rains for dear life as the now biting cold air tore through his hair, chilled him to the bone and threatened to rip the shirt right off his back. He desperately tried to remember the gesture to slow the creature down but panic scattered his thoughts and the only direction he could manage to steer was up or down. His grip slipped a bit and with all his might he tried to pull back and only succeeded in pulling up very hard. He was dragged straight up, the rains now slipping away from him at an even faster degree due to the virtical angle. Now came the overwelming brightness of the sun which grew brighter somehow every second. Suddenly, the rains were snatched from him in the opposite direction and before he could comprehend what had happened, a shreak of pure terror tore from the depfths of his soul as he plummetted back to hogwarts. Then just as suddenly, he was caught, and hovered there, less than a mile above ground on his broomstick. His heart beat wildly in his chest and he was drenched in a cold sweat as he was brought gently and safely down. he shivered. The glair of the sun temperarily blinded him. Dumbledoor's soothing voice spoke to him.
"Are you hurt?"
His teeth chattered and his breath was so labored that he could barely answer. His glasses were handed back to him.
"We'll get you to the nurses office just to be sure."
"h-h-hag..." Harry stammered.
"Hagrid is safe. I will speak with him personally as soon as I get you over for medical care."




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